It seems she's more surprised by something instead of being unhappy. I like that expression! I think that "surprised-ness" look is encouraged with the flowy hair, giving it some kind of dramatic punch (lolwut?)

There are some noticeable changes in her facial structure, well, noticeable for the people who have been following your arts until now~ She has a less rounded face and jaw. I think it suits her better this way.

LONG HAIR! 8D
Noa: *pulls them*

Her lips seems especially voluminous compared to before. I don't know if it was intentional or not in the changes?

If there are any critiques, I would say it's the nose. It seems a bit too centered because of the nostrils' angle. Maybe you can push both of them a bit to your left, and by "a bit", I really mean A BIT XD

Other than that, it's a nice sketch! You should show us a bit more of them some times, and put them into scraps later on if you want.

Ah, and don't die. Summer vacation is soon... or something.

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<sub>Haha, all my friends say it looks like she wants to kill them (or something along those lines) XD

Yeah, I can't get life drawing out of my hand, which is kind of a good thing, because it gives my style a different edge. It's been quite a while since I posted, so the changes are definitely there.

Nox: ow... that hurts more than you think.

Haha, I don't know why, but I always want to give her those sort of lips, so I just decided to do it >_>

I would love to move the nose, but it's spray-fixed so that it won't smudge in the book. So now I can't do anything about it XD

That's actually one of the only sketches I've drawn. Next is Adelynn, hopefully~</sub>

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Really? I see a more gentle look instead XD

It's okay~ You explored what seemed to be a new thing. There is nothing wrong in integrating some of these aspects in your style if it helps it evolve.

Noa: Oh... I... I'm sorry... *looks down in shame*

XDDD Well, I think it still looks good on her. I prefer those over Angelina Jolie's any day~

Aww I see. What product did you use exactly? I am searching for this too! Well, if you can't fix it, just take it in consideration for future drawings ^_^

Adelynn<33

It's been a long time since I've given a long comment to anybody. Ah college...

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"It ain't about how hard ya hit. It's about how hard you can get it and keep moving forward. How much you can take and keep moving forward. That's how winning is done!" ~Rocky Balboa

I love the eyes and lips on this. great style. <3

Lol Chibarrz, she definitely looks more calm and serene. XD Grr.. I can't believe you still went with the name. ):

P.S. Lip ring seems too flat, so her lower lip has a weird illusion of looking flat rather than voluptuous.

Thats really good for just a sketch. *heh*
Gerit: Who cares? I can draw like that.
Eric: Prove it.
Gerit: ... >.>

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<sub>There's lots of people with the same name all over the world, and lots of people that have named their OCs with the same names as other people, weather they know it or they don't. If I find a name I like, I'm using it XD

I think now that people mention it, I start to see surprise in there XD
It looks different with the modified levels in Photoshop, but I had to do it for the picture to be more visible D8</sub>

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_{Haha, yeah, I figured. I'm not sure how willing I was to work on this after a while, though. I mean, she doesn't even have any clothes XD}

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