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Before you comment, please be sure to read the whole comment. I might have answered one of your questions/nitpicks already.

[ Wow. So many mistakes. I didn't notice them until it was way too late to fix them, but.. I just don't have the time to re-do it... I mean... look at how late I'm posting this! :XD: Mayu's head looks big o.e Forgive me Mayu ;_;

Anyway, here's Mamoru, Masumi, and little Mayu wishing you a happy (and very late) Valentine's day! >w<

Things to note: I can't draw small children.. I also can't draw sexy men (sorry Mamoru D8). And above all, I do NOT draw more than 1 person in a picture .. hoooo boy.

Dedicated to my Valentine > :iconmur4s4me: >w< ~ (Once again, I'm sorry this picture sorta sucks D8). We met on Valentine's day and he teased me about wishing him a late Valentine's.. It's almost ironic o.e

Have a wonderful... whatever's left of February ^^; ]

[Time: 20-25 hours? I worked on this picture in a very strange way o.e]
[Tools: Mechanical Pencil, Photoshop CS2 ]
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:iconpsypsynel:
AHHH! very nice! I love it!

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Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it.
:iconnautika:
Aww, it's very cute!

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I know it's sad I never gave a damn about the weather and it never gave a damn about me.

[link] <- Please and thank you.
:iconburossamu-chan:
AWWWW! It's so cuuutttteeee!

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I are say hello to you. (=
:iconthechibiphoenix:
thank you >w<

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Partner in crime> ~Mur4s4me

I can be harsh when commenting, forgive me in advance.
:iconyellowpencil:
.... You made the guy on the left(can't remember who's Mamori and Masumi XD) look soo hawt. WHAT THE. I'm not even supposed to be fond of married guys with children LOL XD WHY IS HE WINKING? Is he flirting with another womannnn? And I don't dare critique you or point out the mistakes because you already pointed out you saw a lot of mistakes. XD I'll just point out some big ones.

The one on the right... has a very.. pudgey nose. O: Like it's puny and fat. It bothers me. You need a more natural nose. XD

Her hand is wrong. Either the thumb is on the wrong side or the fingernails are on the wrong side of the hand.

Mayu's pose is extremely stiff and uncomfortable. She's tipping over. Her hair is blocky and should be a bit more windblown and natural.

There's a lottttt of white spots.

Buttttttttttt, in the end, I'm always jealous of how shiny and luscious you can color the lips. Cx And your digital linearting!
:iconyellowpencil:
And when I say you need a more natural nose, I mean make her face a bit longer so there's more room for the length of the nose to exist. O:
:iconyellowpencil:
Andddddd, I know you won't go back to fix them, but this is just a list of things to watch out for, for next time. XD
:iconyellowpencil:
P.S. What's the thing in the background? Is it a couch? O:
:iconyellowpencil:
COMMENT TRAINNNNNN. CHOO CHOO.

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